https://moodle.bsc.edu/pluginfile.php/476422/mod_forum/post/99442/Visual%20analyis%20-%20Penn.pdf
Great use of word choice in this paper. It keeps the paper from being repetitive and original.
I liked your paper, especially your body paragraphs! Unfortunately I can't edit it because it isn't a Word document. So, a few things I noticed: There's no title or conclusion paragraph. Also, in the introduction, "craft fully" is actually spelled "craftily." Good job!