Visual Analysis on Strawberry Fields Forever music video by the Beatles
Overall this is a great paper. The way you pointed out all the specific details that pointed back to the overall purpose of the song was really good. There was a great point behind every single detail. I also like how you began the essay with a quote, it delivers a better impact on the reader.
I really liked it! I didn’t find any grammar or punctuation errors but I think it would be good to change up the sentence structure a bit, like adding some longer sentences to keep it from sounding choppy. Sorry I don’t really have anything else, it’s really good on its own!