Collage

Collage

by Deleted user -
Number of replies: 7

photo collage

Attachment photo collage.jpg
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Re: Collage

by Hannah Daoust -
The ideas and elements in the collage are nicely presented; I would try to cut out the images a little more just so they have less background in them (like the deer and the tractor), just so its not as busy. The color organization is done successfully, incorporating many different tones throughout. Overall it is done successfully, with good quality in the pictures, I would just try to make it a little more abstract for your final collage.
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by Deleted user -

In agreement with Hannah's comment, it's a very successful piece and you followed the instructions very well. As she had stated, for your final, to avoid your final from becoming very busy, so that way it's more abstract, but still conveys the message that may ressemble your identity. Again very well done. 

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by Deleted user -
Your design is very busy. I feel like I can't focus on one point because there is so much to look at. I do enjoy the neutral colors used throughout. Maybe try and put a little more thought into where the images are put.
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by Joshua Fryer -
This is a nice collage. Some of the pictures you used should be cut up a little bit better so it is more abstract.
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by Kennedy Dickens -
I think your collage is representative of your identity, but it has a lot of different images that sort of overwhelm me. There is not really one place to look or a flow of direction, but I think you have good images and colors going on in your collage.
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by Deleted user -
I like the way the artist cut the images, leaving some of the background in, giving the piece a scrapbook feel. No particulat image stands out and it feels very ballanced.
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by Deleted user -
This shows the images clearly and without much abstraction. Could you go into Photoshop and blur or alter some of the images to make it more abstract? You can use this design, but work on it more for a higher grade.