Tempting enough?

Tempting enough?

by Deleted user -
Number of replies: 5

Current title: 

Dance: A Controlled Evolution

Alternate Titles: 

American Christianity, Dance & Historical Ambivalence 

Moving while Christian: A Look at Dance and Christian Ambivalence

Dare to Move ?: An Inside Look at the Christian Narratives of Controlling Bodies and Dance

I think I prefer the last title to my current title. I do not know if it is too long though? I think it is more engaging, intriguing, and insightful. I typically lean more towards creative titles like the book recommends, but for this paper I erred on the side of simplicity. Please let me know what you think if you read this. 



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Re: Tempting enough?

by Cole Myers -
I like "Moving while Christian: A Look at Dance and Christian Ambivalence", but I think that Moving While Christian: Looking at Dance and Christian Ambivalence" is a bit better. I also like the last one like you do, but I think that removing the question mark conveys it a bit more fluidly.
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Re: Tempting enough?

by Collin Cortinas -
I think that the second alternative title is really good, but I would take out the "A Look at" part. Moving While Christian: Dance and Christian Ambivalence is really academically sound and to the point while not being boring at all. Good stuff!
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Re: Tempting enough?

by Maude Sutton -
I like Collin's suggestion, but they all could possibly work.
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Re: Tempting enough?

by Deleted user -
Cosette, I love the last title, as well. It's engaging! I like how you added a short, entertaining question. It draws the reader's attention. It's longer than the others, but it redeems creative qualities that captivate the audience.
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Re: Tempting enough?

by Deleted user -
I like the last one a lot. I wouldn't worry about the length, but the question mark is a bit off. I also like the second alternative as well.