Cosette,
Good revision. Cutting out words that you chose because you feel that they fit best is something that can be really hard, and it is certainly something I struggle with a lot. I tend to love my own writing first, and criticize it later.
Good revision. Cutting out words that you chose because you feel that they fit best is something that can be really hard, and it is certainly something I struggle with a lot. I tend to love my own writing first, and criticize it later.