I think that this edit is a great one. I feel like people even in the denominations that believe in the Holy Trinity find it a hard thing to grasp sometimes. So, I think that providing that information is helpful to the reader.
Also, Cosette, I get where you are coming from. I think that I tend to over explain because I feel like people reading my paper in this course would already have some background knowledge. In efforts to not be too elementary in my writing I end up doing exactly that.
Also, Cosette, I get where you are coming from. I think that I tend to over explain because I feel like people reading my paper in this course would already have some background knowledge. In efforts to not be too elementary in my writing I end up doing exactly that.