Discussion 2

Discussion 2

by Collin Cortinas -
Number of replies: 5

Before: The story of Adam and Eve in the garden of Eden is a narrative that is arguably one of the most famous in human history, and the detail and life that Milton gave to these age-old characters is profound. While it is clear that Adam and Eve are the hesitant protagonists of the story, Satan serves as a sort of anti-hero that has an understandable and semi-redeeming outlook. Satan sees himself as unjustly ruled and wishes for autonomy for himself and for all angels, and if this situation was taken out of the context of God, Angels, and Demons, it would seem clear that the fight for autonomy is a just one. The hard truth comes when one realizes that the figure being rebelled against is not a corrupt monarchy or dictator, but God Himself.

After: When my study of the Story of Adam and Eve in the garden of Eden began, I thought I knew what I was going to find. God as the justified ruler and Satan as an evil manipulator, along with many more of the stereotypes we are all familiar with. However, in my study of Paradise Lost, I found Satan to be an understandable and semi-redeeming character that sees himself as unjustly ruled and wishes for autonomy. If his situation was taken out of the context of God, angels, and demons, it would seem clear that his fight is a just one. The shocking truth found within the text is that the figure being rebelled against is not a corrupt monarch or dictator, but God Himself.

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Re: Discussion 2

by Cole Myers -
Even the most evil people tend to believe that they are justified in their actions. I doubt that Satan can be a compelling character in a story unless he is a character with real motives and reasons for them. I'd be more afraid of an evil that is 'reasonable' to themselves, at least. Maybe talk about this? I think that perhaps the narrative of Paradise Lost is one that tries to, quite literally and pun intended, play devil's advocate.
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by Deleted user -
I like this edit a lot, Collin! I think adding yourself into your discussion really makes the whole paragraph more relatable, especially because lots of people will have similar perceptions about God and Satan. It will be good at keeping the audience hooked and make them feel like they are involved in some way.
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by Deleted user -
Collin, this is a really good revision! It adds a lot of drama to the paper and provides a new perspective.
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by Deleted user -
I think your reference to Paradise Lost certainly strengthened your point n this paragraph. It reiterates the idea of using research to make an argument versus personal opinion. Very well done!