Jargon

Jargon

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Before: The postcolonial reading of the Bible takes into account the imperialistic factors that apply to Rahab’s story.


After: The postcolonial reading of the Bible takes into account the imperialistic factors that apply to Rahab’s story. Postcolonial reading of a story requires one to consider how the subjugation of a people affects their actions in situations placed on them by this conquering. 

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Re: Jargon

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I would maybe put the second half of the sentence into a footnote. I haven't seen the paragraph, but it seems a tad choppy. if you don't put it in a footnote maybe try to introduce it throughout the paragraph or before the sentence.