Structure

Structure

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Before 

Intro 

The Gospel: Overview (Matthew, Mark, Luke & John)

Characters (Jesus, John the Baptist, The Dove, Water)

Theological background 

Conclusion 


After 

Introduction 

Baptism and Theological Background 

The Gospel: Overview (Matthew, Mark, Luke & John)

Characters (Jesus, John the Baptist, The Dove, Water)

Conclusion 

To the after— I added a lot to the section on baptism (specific examples of denominations) and then removed a lot smaller details from The Gospel section and the Characters. I completely rearranged most of the paper so it would flow better. 


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Re: Structure

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I like your restructuring, Isabel. It gives the average reader more context on baptism before looking into the scripture itself. Great job!