Before:
Introduction
Interpretation of the Birth Story
Jesus as Hope for the Oppressed, Liberation Theology
As a Refugee
Why Does This Matter
Conclusion
After:
Introduction
Birth Story of Jesus In the Biblical Text
Interpretation of the Birth Story
Jesus as Hope for the Oppressed
Jesus as a Refugee
Why This Matters
Conclusion
I added a section of information with a summary and outline of the actual scripture. I think this benefitted my paper by adding necessary information for the average reader who may not be familiar with the actual story of Jesus’ birth. I also took away the part on Liberation Theology because it was confusing and unnecessary to the overall purpose of the paper.