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ounds like you got some good perspective here. I'm not sure what expertise you uncle provides. What is his career field? Besides offering general advice about human emotions, is there something specific you can gained? Perhaps Jordan sees a psychologist and starts to ask these questions for the audience can understand his emotional roller coaster. Otherwise, we are in the dark most of the movie and don't understand his motivations and frustrations.
Re-read my note to the 1-page synopsis and try to flesh out answers to my questions. A feature film needs lots of ups and downs.
Re-read my note to the 1-page synopsis and try to flesh out answers to my questions. A feature film needs lots of ups and downs.