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This story shows promise, but as we discussed in the workshop, I worry Josh is too passive. What is his dramatic need, what does he actively try to accomplish, what are the obstacles, and what is his character arc?
As well written as the character bio is, you still didn't address these. Read the guidelines.
As well written as the character bio is, you still didn't address these. Read the guidelines.
I just saw your other email about the new story (the cop who chases a criminal). This will obviously be a much better opportunity for you to show off your writing skills, so good choice.
Still, I don't see a complete character analysis. What is his character arc? Describe his professional/personal/private life. Etc.
Still, I don't see a complete character analysis. What is his character arc? Describe his professional/personal/private life. Etc.