Good workshop yesterday. The big thing to improve on is format. Use some of the suggested resources I sent you.
The story and characters are very strong for a short film.
The story and characters are very strong for a short film.
Here is what I’m looking for in this assignment:
Structure – 30%
Looking for a clear Plot Point 1 and Plot Point 2
And a Midpoint: an unexpected Middle in Act 2, tied to the climax
Character – 30%
Golden Rule/Dramatic Need
Character Arc
Visual Writing/Description/Dialogue – 20%
Visual descriptions (and aural)
Sharp dialogue
Format – 20%
Professional format, spelling, grammar
Structure – 30%
Looking for a clear Plot Point 1 and Plot Point 2
And a Midpoint: an unexpected Middle in Act 2, tied to the climax
Character – 30%
Golden Rule/Dramatic Need
Character Arc
Visual Writing/Description/Dialogue – 20%
Visual descriptions (and aural)
Sharp dialogue
Format – 20%
Professional format, spelling, grammar