Fascinating premise. It allows for exploration of a lot of philosophical, religious, or even biological themes.
Your paradigm has a good setup. For PP2, this should be the end of Act 2 and a setup for the climax. What does she do during Act 2, before she meets this group of people? And what happens after PP2 and before the climax?
After working on your character biography, maybe you can strengthen Act 2 and Act 3.
Your paradigm has a good setup. For PP2, this should be the end of Act 2 and a setup for the climax. What does she do during Act 2, before she meets this group of people? And what happens after PP2 and before the climax?
After working on your character biography, maybe you can strengthen Act 2 and Act 3.