screenplay project #4
A potentially great story. You can strengthen the paradigm, based on our in-class discussion.
The big question is WHAT does she do to improve her life?
What happens between PP1 and PP2? What you probably want to say is that Act 2 consists of her improving her life, and the PP2 is something specific that prepares her to get approval in the climax.
Generally, what does she do to earn the audience’s sympathy? And why does she want a child through adoption (rather than having her own). Perhaps your character biography will help you answer those questions.
The big question is WHAT does she do to improve her life?
What happens between PP1 and PP2? What you probably want to say is that Act 2 consists of her improving her life, and the PP2 is something specific that prepares her to get approval in the climax.
Generally, what does she do to earn the audience’s sympathy? And why does she want a child through adoption (rather than having her own). Perhaps your character biography will help you answer those questions.