Nice potential either for a horror or comedy. Which way do you see it? After PP2, create some minor obstacles that he must overcome. Then, after PP2, create a climax. For example, after the car crash, he has to get out of the car and face the evil being.
Sometimes a “dream” ending is a little weak.
What will be the man’s character arc? Does the dream help him learn something about himself? Help him cope with some other issue in his life? It doesn’t have to be drastic; it could be subtle.
-for example, he was not a fan of horror movies, but his friends really like them. Now after this experience, he decides to give horror more appreciation
-or something deeper, such as the evil being represents something in his life or personality that he must deal with but he’s been avoiding it
Sometimes a “dream” ending is a little weak.
What will be the man’s character arc? Does the dream help him learn something about himself? Help him cope with some other issue in his life? It doesn’t have to be drastic; it could be subtle.
-for example, he was not a fan of horror movies, but his friends really like them. Now after this experience, he decides to give horror more appreciation
-or something deeper, such as the evil being represents something in his life or personality that he must deal with but he’s been avoiding it