not sure if this is the one I want to go with
Great setup. You probably have it in mind, but I’m not clear why stealing is his response to his diagnosis. Perhaps it’s just something that has always interested him but he has resisted the urge to go against the rules, and now it doesn’t matter.
Based on this paradigm, I’m not sure how the end is resolved. How does escalating his life of crime relate to his impending death? Perhaps you can shift the paradigm slightly.
Based on this paradigm, I’m not sure how the end is resolved. How does escalating his life of crime relate to his impending death? Perhaps you can shift the paradigm slightly.