My silly little feedback

My silly little feedback

by Taylor Dykes -
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Daniel and Alishaba:

Even though I was seated at a weird angle I could see and hear super well

What emotions are Clark feeling about his parents fighting? How does this trauma manifest for him?

The stop didn’t feel unnatural 


Nadia and Price:

I could see and hear well

The dynamics and personalities are really clear immediately

Really good use of props

I like the breed of manic energy y’all both give the characters


Selby and Kayy:

The door kind of blocked my view but I can hear well

This scene really makes me feel things

The differences between their thoughts on homophobia and the different comfortability with their identities is really clear and potent. 


Claire and Evan:

I could hear well but I couldn’t see Evan at first

The scene is really interesting from this angle

I love Katherine’s stubbornness, it feels like she uses it as a shield

The argument was so visceral


Megan and LG:

Could see and hear

The difference between the two sisters is really well played

Why does the sister want her to go so badly? Deep down? 

There’s so many layers here and they’re portrayed beautifully


David and Matt:

Could see and hear

I feel like this has been in good shape before and it really got honed

It feels really natural but also feels like a scene in a sitcom (in a good way)

David what were your character’s feelings on fat women and fat people in general before dating this woman? How has that changed?

Chair motion is great