Final Feedback

Final Feedback

by Abby Newton -
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Daniel & Alishaba 

None of the Above

  • Daniel’s pacing is good. Alishaba’s angry striking out the answers was good. 

  • No questions

  • I could easily see the both of you, and I could hear both of you


Nadia & Price

sad girl hours

  • I like Nadia starting in a dance stretch, and Price having his shoes off shows he’s really comfortable. Snatching the phone back was funny. Nadia’s dancing was funny, and Price videoing her was funny. The falling to the phone was cometic. Also, Nadia, you put some faith in that table.

  • Was that music from Price’s phone? Not the music Nadia danced to, the music at the beginning. If it was, it was a nice touch to show his disinterest

  • I could see and hear both of you


Selby & Kayy

The Cake

  • Selby taking off her shoes showed she was comfortable in the space. “You’re a normal sized piece of shit” made me laugh. Kayy, your use of tone and how you say things is so good. The cardigan throw at the end was funny.

  • No questions

  • I could consistently hear both of you, but especially when Selby was at the door, I couldn’t see them. Occasionally, I could not see Kayy’s face. 


Evan & Claire

The Proof

  • The set up is good, and all the books in Evan’s bag were a nice touch. Also the angry putting the books back in the bag was funny. The notebook falling out of the jacket was so good, and the angry fighting over it was so good. 

  • No questions

  • Because of the stand, I could not see Claire’s face when she’s sitting, and later Evan when he sat in the chair on Stage Right.  


LJ & Megan

The Proof

  • The sunglasses Megan are beautiful, really brings together that she’s hungover and really doesn’t want the sun in her eyes. LJ having a mug in her hands really shows that she did make coffee, so she can offer a cup of it to Megan. LJ’s face when she said “He didn’t belong in the nuthouse” was good because it showed the sisters trying to get along and not fight but it’s bubbling to a point where they can’t play nice. The overlapping argument was good. 

  • No questions

  • I could see and hear both of you the entire time


David & Matt

Fat Pig

  • Matt propping his feet on the table really showed his character and then sitting on the edge of the table. The almost give and then snatch back by David was funny, but not letting Matt have it really showed David’s worry that Matt would take it and run. The tentative way that David gave Matt the picture was good, it wasn’t immediate because he was worried he wouldn’t give it back. Using the rollie chair to roll away and then kicking David’s hand away was so funny. Then Matt running away like a child was even funnier. The email notification sound and using the computer was brilliant.

  • No questions

  • I could see and hear both of you fine the entire time