Final Showing Feedback

Final Showing Feedback

by Lusie Cuskey -
Number of replies: 0

Daniel and Alishaba
You all are working in props more effectively! It would still be helpful to have different sheets for different subjects.
The pace is really solid.
We can see you all well overall; angling the table would let us more consistently get Alishaba in more than profile.
A little more specificity of space would be helpful - the movement is working well, but knowing more about the space would help the movement to be able to be more motivated.
NICE job keeping the scene running when lines went wonky, Daniel!
Alishaba, you're doing a good job staying physically alive even though you don't move.
It's helpful to look up words you don't know how to pronounce.
Why does Clark transition to talking about not hating Jamie?
The way you all are playing with opening and closing distance between the characters is fun.

Nadia and Price
You've both made effective costuming choices.
The connections you all are finding between the characters are lovely; you've created a really compelling physical vocabulary for them.
Ooh, the dance break/filming moment was so creative/effective/heartbreaking!
The use of the phone throughout worked well.

Selby and Kayy
Thanks for more clearly defining the space!
The levels you're playing with are fun.
It's helpful that y'all have things to do. 
Kayy, your face is so eloquent!
The game of the door works well.
I love Macey's constant choice to undercut cutting to the chase by returning to her task.
You all are playing with angles in interesting ways throughout.

Evan and Claire
Nice job staying in the moment and supporting each other when lines went wonky.
You defined the space more specifically.
This feels a little under-rehearsed; I think y'all could have used one more go-round together before the showing.
The transition to talking about jogging felt coherent.
Claire, watch for your habit of smiling so it can be a choice you choose instead of a default.
The overlapping worked well. 
Y'all generally made effective movement choices.

Cayleigh, Robyn, Taylor
You all have brought things to do and they're generally working well. 
The top of the scene felt a little static; I think this could've used one more rehearsal for you all to work through incorporating new elements.
Nice job staying with each other when things got weird with lines.
Robyn - the moment of impulse to get up followed by the realization that getting up would give up the secret worked well.

LJ and Megan
Nice attention to detail around your costuming.
You all are making such specific physical and vocal choices!
Catherine is trying SO HARD to play nice.
The "what are you doing here?" was fun.
You're doing so much better at listening to and playing with each other.
Megan, watch for sighing as emphasis.
The landing of "you might've been better" and "better than what?" worked well.

David and Matt
Nice attention to costuming.
Adding movement makes sense, and that movement needs to be motivated - why is Tom moving?
I really appreciate that you all gave things time to breathe.