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by Nadia Mason -
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Alishaba + Daniel

  • 1.I liked when daniel said: seven. Daniel’s motions were nice and effective. 
  • 2.Is there a situation where Alishaba’s character could have moved out of her seat?
  • 3.I could hear them and see the actors. Maybe for the second question. Alsihaba seemed like she had stuff to do when she was writing on the paper. Daniel seemed like he was pacing a bit. 


Selby + Kayy

1.I liked when kay dropped that purple thing when she laughed. I liked when selby “closed” the door. I liked selby’s call of: “and i want them to be there.” i thought kay’s “your a normal size of shit” was very effective. The pauses where really interesting and how it felt like a real conversation with people. 
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3.I can hear than and see Selby’s face the entire time but kayy i had trouble with seeing. I liked how they gave themselves things to do, like selby folding the shirt and taking off their shoes, and how kay was messing with her bag. (context i was sitting on what would be stage left). 

Claire + Evan

1.Claire’s face expression and her body language were really nice. The use of the set was also worked very good. I liked how evan was trying to grab the notebook back. I liked how claire whispered the word “shit” at the very end. 
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3.I can hear them nicely and like how because of each actor moving to different spots allow for the audience to see different people’s faces and their expressions. 



Cayleigh + Taylor + Robyn

I liked cayleigh messing with the piano and then starting her line. I especially like when cayleigh interrupted robyn with playing the piano. I thought robyn pausing and then continuing her line because they were in pain. Taylor facial expression mad me laugh at lot. I liked when Taylor went over and tried to turn off the piano. n/aI could hear them all and see them, the use of them all being on different parts of the stage. 
LJ + Megan
1. loved megan’s costume, the sunglasses and bag especially. I liked how megan gave herself stuff to do, like messing in her bag. I liked when megan brought out the file and was destperaly trying to change her mind. 
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3.I could hear them really well, but when megan turned to talk to LJ and really listen to her i lost seeing her face.


Matt + David

I liked when they both tried to hit each other, which was funny. Matt doging david attempts at catching whim was very effective. 

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I had a hard time trying to hear certain things matt said, slightly mumbled.