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Cracked Screens Act 1 + Updated Treatment

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Here's the update: I redid *most* of the dialogue for pages 8-18 (nothing drastic, just more realism). I wrote pages 18-28, which takes us just a teeny bit after Act 1s conclusion! (Dialogue editing on these 10 pages to come next week!)I have an updated treatment that reflects changes and shifts in my plot points!
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  1. New Treatment, Too. (Feat. Revision Mode)
    The newest treatment!
  2. Slightly updated Act 1
    Just a bit updated