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Here's the update: I redid *most* of the dialogue for pages 8-18 (nothing drastic, just more realism). I wrote pages 18-28, which takes us just a teeny bit after Act 1s conclusion! (Dialogue editing on these 10 pages to come next week!)I have an updated treatment that reflects changes and shifts in my plot points!
Sorry it's not 20 pages, but I cut off at a natural stopping point.